(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Just started youtube and currently only have 4 videos up but i will be uploading alot more in the near future which will include: Black Ops, MW2, Cod 4, MW3, Battlefield 3, Gears 3 and what ever else I am playing.

My channel will be focused on hints and tips video commentaries. My commentaries are not very great atm so Im looking for some feedback to help me get better


My most recent video

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Thats a link to my channel

Im not sure if this is the right place to post this.

Gameplay was bad ass. Commentary did need work. My advice:
1. Don't do a play by play of the gameplay. We can see that you hip fired someone or whatever.
2. The only exception is when you want us (the viewer) to look at something. Eg. That crazy chopper gunner was worthy of being talked about
3. Things you can talk about: a funny story. opinions (about the game, future games, other games), current events.
4. The only other exception to point 1: If you can talk nonstop about the gameplay and make it more upbeat and exciting.

Make sure you like the commentary. If you wouldn't watch it yourself, why would anyone else. But don't be too hard on yourself.

For just now joining on youtube it isn't really bad at all. Need more videos is all but as it is new that is not a big deal at all. Add some COD 4 and 5 videos lol I can teach you how to mod cod 4 and 5!!!!

Thanks man it means alot, and yeah I think of all these things to talk about but when I come to commentating my mind just goes blank lol, And ive watched them back and I personally don't think they are too bad since Ive just started but I am going to keep working on it and hopefully will improve in the future.

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Thanks mate and Im not really into to hacking games but thanks very much, been playing abit of Cod 4 but finding it hard as there's so many hackers.

I used to do that all the time. Easy fix is just write it down next to you or type it out in notepad and put it up while you commentate. I'm still learning too

Yeah thats what I am doing now lol just writing loads of notes in notepad of what I can talk about In my next commentary