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Check it out. Constructive criticism is appreciated!

Great! Try not to use crutch words such as: like, um, what I mean ect.

Yes, you did good but:
You don't want to:
Stall
Be Nervous
say ah, like, um, or whatever.
Don't pause like you did several times A.K.A stall.
Don't ask for donations straight off the bat, especially not in your first video

What you want to do is just talk about what your doing and what your watching.
Keep up anything I didn't list, lol.

Yea half way through I realized I had so much blank stuff. It was my first try and I didn't wanna try and do another cause I thought this was good enough lol.

I like Commentaries so i like this 1 YUP!!!! What games do u have Soldadito7?
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nice I Like long Commtarys Where people Talk bout Stuff Other Than the Gameplay .

Like other gameplays I recorded or just other games? I have fifa world cup, and nhl 10, and gameplay I'm working on a montage.

Exactly what I was gonna say but other than that good video!

KOOOOOL

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coooooooool