Post: My Rap -- Check it Out :)
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05-20-2010, 07:56 AM
#1
420
Kush Friendly
First One:
my lyrics are simple but yet so complicated
theres a demon in me that wants my soul confiscated
but thats the least of my problems that im afraid of
i just wanna escape this full scale war
if i get caught it in, ill fight back with methaphors
like these lyrics are my fortress
i got to make sure nobody gets hurt, not even my archers
ill finish this battle, even though i wasnt the starter
but when its all done, i know ima still feel like a lost cause
im all thats left cuz i lost all
add to the pressure i feel worthless
not knowing why im here cuz i feel hopeless
on this earths surface, serving with no purpose
emotion crushed, froezen, the feelings atrotious
to me, heaven feels like a stangers home
and hell the danger zone
so earth is what i claim my own
beneath me the people burn, and above the angels glow
im stuck, but im fearless like a solider in the battlefield
and musics my only weapon, stripped of my sword and shield
caught up in this city of danger
i walk alone marking every soul endangered
im no different with a crushed soul
im trapped in my body, someone else got control
but only of my actions, the minds still mine
so half of me is on the dark side
the other is back with the feeble
split in to two, one innocent, the other evil
i can still fight it if i focus
and get my mind off of trying to be the dopest
im put back on track to inherit my spirit
and to claim what was mine from the beggining
if find the right path
and leave the rubble behind in the aftermath
Second One:[/U]
The Phenom, honored with a military insignia
You could dream on, I never need a pick me up
Raps and lines connect and break bones
Caps and nines disconnect and take souls
You guys are childish, speaking in a fake tone
I got this dream to keep writing
I got this team to keep fighting
Built with survival instincts
Mind controlled, and said that the bible’s been shit
Never been taught what’s right from the right and wrong
So we do what we like, we fight and grow strong
We been living that way for so long
Its our only escape, and the only way we hold on
Till we vanish and our souls gone
Talk so grimy , but act so righteous
We remain blessed, and so priceless
But at the same time, mentally distorted
From the 1st day, we was taught wrong
So we missed orders
Missed out on all this
So now we are who they call spicks
But I’m so disturbed, taken over by aggravation
So angry with a feeling of irritation
All I have to rely on is pride and dignity
In a state the exact opposite of integrity
I feel worthless, obsolete
What’s got in me?
Something’s always holding me back
What the **** is stopping me?
From reaching my destination
I’m preaching, teaching by exclamation
But yea I feel like nothing
So I kill the steel mic buggin’
I’m walking with souls of the mislead
Ones with mischief, out of control and miss fed
I get out my frustration through this pen and paper
Waiting to feel the presence of the saver
I’m caught up in the city of danger
Competing with strangers
But I’m good, I know the combat trilogy
I last in the war zone, nobody’s killing me
We were taught to take no prisoners
No warning, no mercy
So fuk divine heresy
Forever labeled a soldier in the danger
Never do I stain my own
So its my place, not some strangers home
Third One:
Everything spoken is lies
Broken inside, as I open my eyes
Darkness is all I see
Hypocrisy has gotten me
One by one, all the constellations drift away
I didn’t even know that I missed the day
So I sit and prey
And hope on blind faith
What I see is uncertain, too vague
My feeling keep eating me up
Should I get back on my feet and be tough?
I never know when it’s enough
That’s just the way I am, nobody’s choosing this
Did Jesus have an option of wanting to be on the crucifix?
How is everything corrupted in a world so beautiful?
Its said to be sublime, but seems too unusual
Even religion can despise you
Who would have ever thought that the heavenly skies
Would be selling me lies?
Not even telling me why
But still I speak from the heart
Until the day that im ripped and shred apart
But yet, seeing the end, I search for a start
Fourth One:
As I take walk amongst these lonely streets
I hear the wind blowing, it’s the only beat
The sounds of the innocent
The guilty stock the earth
And deserving people are locked up in the pen
And their doing longer than five to ten
But that’s not really my concern, I could careless
I can honestly just stare at death
Because I have no care left
I can hardly even catch a little breath
I’m limping, taking brittle steps
I feel as if I don’t belong anywhere
On this planet, not many care
Should I believe in the heavens or hell?
I’m an angel, or a devil that fell
I have no meaning to be searching
Pain and suffering, I’m blessed to be hurting
But to some, that may not make sense
You’ll understand only if you have fake friends
But still I stand
Ill, microphone at hand
My thought process is produced on demand
Writing lyrics in my only way out
My family, they doubt…
That I’m just another normal kid
One who’s competing with moral sins?
I will forever have an immortal grin
YUP I KNOW THERE ALOT, BUT YEA TELL ME WHAT YOU GUYS THINK
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05-20-2010, 07:58 AM
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Da Only OG
Trollin Since '09
05-20-2010, 08:07 AM
#4
420
Kush Friendly
Originally posted by Fletcher
Good lyrics but what sort of beats were you gonna up them on? That would gave a clearer view to see how it would flow.
check these beats out, they should fit
[ame=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2HsBs3n1n8&feature=PlayList&p=0FFE6810AE2C4C13&playnext_from=PL&playnext=1&index=2]YouTube - Demon Wings (Instrumental)[/ame]
[ame=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vazV9_2IdFk&feature=related]YouTube - The Pain Inside (Instrumental)[/ame]
[ame=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bo5gaqXHrrc&feature=related]YouTube - Sword and Shield (Instrumental)[/ame]
mostly dark beats.
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