(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Ok this is a short clip of score I'm working on. Well actually it's the whole piece (34 seconds long). This will probably be used for a scene in a film or something.

I just need some feedback. I.e. "this is great don't change it" or "wow you're amazing at what you do" or "lower the second viola section" etc etc.

As it is, I think it's pretty much golden, with the exception of some minor leveling. so you tell me

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Sounds good to me, like you said, clean it up a bit. Could be used for an intro or something.

There is a lot of noise at the end, or it's either a symbol? :/ I personally think it's good and if put into the right thing/song then it could be made sweet. Like maybe start it as an intro, then when it goes quiet for a second go into proper heavy shit. That's just me though

Yeah I was thinking of using this as an intro to a composed piece like the multiplayer main menu music in MW2. Like a mix between industrial percussion and some orchestral pieces.

And yeah the ending noise you hear is a splash cymbal being rung out to add a shimmer effect to the fade out of the gong.

Good for a dramatic scene.