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[ame=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PYuH8Wa5M98]YouTube - Best rap! - next eminem[/ame]

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The beat is to loud or your voice is to low. It's hard to hear your voice.

Hahahaha nice man I was expecting something nooby but it was honestly pretty good, and nice lyrics.

You got the voice for rapping, i don't mind listening to it, but your flow is too rushed. It seems like your just trying to rhyme words and not really paying attention to the song it self. This beat is good, but at points your flow jumps it you know? So yea, just listen to the beat and follow it, and i think you should go a bit slower because at times it seems like your having trouble spitting, like stuttering a bit, but other than that, you got the voice for it, just experiment with the flow :y: Let me know if you got any more tracks, wouldn't mind listening to them.

Pretty Good. Great Beat . You need to lower the Beat Pitch so the beat and your voice go together and not sound off balance

nice yoooo if u need someone that sounds like justin bieber at singin hmu

Nice but you need to speak louder or make the beat lower thas the only bad thing everything else is great!

agreed with the above comments, i can barely hear you and the beat is great.

Nice work, man. Keep it up!