Post: My Flash Animation Project (In Progress)- Need your opinions on it
12-30-2010, 04:51 AM #1
+tA. Rick
Former Staff
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); This is my flash animation final project. It's for my multimedia web design class.

This is only a brief look at it as it is not finished yet.(Final version needs to run from about 30-40 seconds). I also haven't added background images or sound effects.

Anyways I thought I would show it to you and see what you think about it. Oh, and sorry about the watermarks. The SWF to AVI converter I used automatically placed it there.

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[ws]DwpocnLka_Y[/ws]


Anyways, here's what I have planned in mind for the story line:
1.Red and black stick guy teleport to a warzone
-There they will be able to think of any weapon that they want to use and it will digitalize right into their hands (Similar to the light-cycles in Tron)

2.After a couple of moments of fighting they will stop to think about why they're fighting each other, then they'll look out towards the screen.

3.Scene will zoom out to a guy sitting down looking at a computer screen. The stick figures inside the computer will use the teleporter once more to teleport outside into reality and face their creator.

4.As they're about to attack him, the screen will go black and the credits will roll.

or Alternative...
-As they're about to attack him, the creator will wake up realizing that it was only a dream and wonders when will he ever finish his flash project.

Tell me what you think about the plot (any opinions or thoughts will be appreciated). Whether it needs more detail.
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12-30-2010, 04:56 AM #2
PrayForPlagues
The Black Key
Pretty Cool man
12-30-2010, 04:59 AM #3
Cudder
Read My Mind
I like it. Id ditch the alternate ending the first one seems more witty. And how are you going to show that theyre thinking about what theyre fighting about? Dialog?
12-30-2010, 05:03 AM #4
+tA. Rick
Former Staff
Originally posted by Cudder View Post
I like it. Id ditch the alternate ending the first one seems more witty. And how are you going to show that theyre thinking about what theyre fighting about? Dialog?

Yeah, dialog will be involved, though only as the action starter and ender. In other words they will only talk before the fight and near the end in order to transition from a fighting scene to an ending scene.
12-30-2010, 05:05 AM #5
Hold on, the limitless amount of awesome things that that red button could be, and you chose a lighting bolt that kills them both? Damn. That's anti-climatic. I was expecting a nuke that causes a black hole that sucks in the universe or some crazy shit
12-30-2010, 05:10 AM #6
+tA. Rick
Former Staff
Originally posted by MATT23116 View Post
Hold on, the limitless amount of awesome things that that red button could be, and you chose a lighting bolt that kills them both? Damn. That's anti-climatic. I was expecting a nuke that causes a black hole that sucks in the universe or some crazy shit


That was what I had in mind, but ultimately, the ideas given afterward were really limited :x,
Oh and it doesn't kill them. It's meant to teleport them.
12-30-2010, 07:17 AM #7
Shootprado
Newton Nation 1
looks pretty awsome man
12-30-2010, 05:00 PM #8
Chrome
At least I can fight
Yeah, I think that somehting else other than a lightning bolt should come out after the red button.

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01-01-2011, 05:38 AM #9
+tA. Rick
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Originally posted by Brom3 View Post
Yeah, I think that somehting else other than a lightning bolt should come out after the red button.


Do you have any considerations?

Also, the video has been updated.
01-01-2011, 05:50 AM #10
Just upload a .swf Smile
megaswf.com

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