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You did better on your first commentary than I did on mine.:wtf:

Constructive Criticism: Here we go

1. Turn your game volume lower then your voice over. ( Around -23 if your using vegas )
2. DONT curse every 5 seconds, No one wants to hear how many curse words you know.
3. DONT make fun of us Americans. NOBODY, wants to hear that sorta view: thinking Americans are fat and lazy. That's not very nice of you.
4. Maybe invest in a new mic, yours is not to good.
5. Make a list of topics your going to talk about before hand so you don't have a boring spot.
6. If you mess up or think its not good, just start over, its fine to re-do it 4 or 5 times.
7. Try not to complain so much ( i.e: painkiller, last stand, lag, Americans )
8. Aim for a better score, nowadays its like 30-4 or above is the youtube standards for FFA
9. DONT make fun of us Americans. NOBODY, wants to hear that sorta view: thinking Americans are fat and lazy. That's not very nice of you.
(Yeah i put it twice )

Thank you and hope you follow some of this advice. :embarrassed:

hey bro nice commentary but wrong section

yeah my brain wasen't working to much that morning