(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Well, I've been bullied alot, throughout my whole life. So, I came up with the idea to put it into lyrical form. Here's the lyrics I got for my chorus:


I've been bullied for 9 years of my life,
I have a big heart, put up a fight
Why do you do this? It ain't right
... You cowards, get a ****ing life.



Any feedback?

its good, here's mine edited from urs:

I've been bullied for 9 years of my life,
Bullies beware; you have killed them
But no doubt their wounds will heal
And you will regret your every deed
And the way you made them feel
I have a big heart, put up a fight
Why do you do this? It ain't right
... You cowards, get a ****ing life.

Remember, I want it as a chorus, as I feel it's pretty powerfully and it'd get throught there heads.

Its good :y:
Although I know nothing of rap or even like the music lol :p

Nice mate crnt wait to here the rap