(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Okay I decided to make this thread so members can post their verses for feedback and shit.

Well, here's one I just completed. Shit's fresh outta the oven :p

I was teased as a kid ever since I started school
I was a good boy, didnt break no rules
Just because I'm fat doesnt mean you can tease me
It doesnt look like I'm hurt, but inside I'm bleedin
Yours words wound me like a soldier at war
Your mouth is your weapon, you keep hurting me more
You leave me feeling tattered and torn
You'll regret what ya said to me when I'm gone
I dont care what you'z say anymore,
I'm reborn
It's a new dawn
All your words should be withdrawn
What you say to me is dead wrong
I've been taking everyones shit for way too long
Yo, To gain respect you have to respect others
You should treat everyone like they ya brothers
One day they'll be here and gone the next
It's common sence, this shit ain't complex.


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