(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); This is a PSA I made for this project, and want some feedback. *NOTE the Phone Number and Website Are NOT real, Due to my teacher did not want them real.

Nice job man!

That's pretty good bro, you got me convinced

Thanks, I just really need the A because I had all A's but dropped the A to the B in the class. kay:

Its sad, in the first picture it looks like you could break those kids arms with two fingers...

Its great dude. You should definitely receive an A!

I'll be honest, because you obviously came here for some constructive criticism.

I would need the outline for the project to be able to judge this. However, it's slightly short. The last slide is cut off (The one with the phone number etc.)

If I were you I would make it look more "epic" if you will. Like for the slide at 0:24 I would make it:

Every 3.6 seconds someone dies of hunger

75% are children


You want to make the important things really stand out when you are making this presentation. Also, if I were you I would try to use some higher resolution pictures. And I know it's a small thing but it actually makes a difference: Change the aspect ratio so it occupies the whole screen, so there are no black bars on the side.

I get what your saying , but the slides had to go with the song, and has to between 30-40 Seconds, If its more you get points taken off.