(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); is this poem i wrote any good? i got some inspiration from the matrix and carl sagan. it has to have some of these elements :personification,metaphor,simile,symbolism,sensory languaege.

i personally dont like poetry period, so i havent praticed it much so here it is.

its "free verse" by the way.

I am a virus

I am a virus,
a cancer of a mote of dust
Suspended in a sunbeam.
Consuming until all resources are
Squandered and then moving.
Taking more than what is needed
but never giving back.

I am human.
One of morals,
intrinsic values,
and materialistic objects
which mother nature and
the universe
are completely indifferent to.

i really hate the ending but i like the rest of it.