Post: a few new poems i've written in my spare time....
12-12-2012, 07:39 AM #1
Richtofen
Ze Doctor
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); i'm a bit of a creative writer sometimes, mostly short stories and song lyrics to go along with my musical compositions, but every now and then i'll come up with some dark poetry.
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The first half of this one i put on my album art for my set of releases known as "The Infected"

Beware the ones who walk in death
Their bodies cold, and without breath
As they attack the ones who dare survive,
Humanity suffers because Death is alive.

Damned are the ones that carry sin
Their flesh is tainted, the rot within
As they wander aimlessly in search of release,
Until the decay brings them peace.

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This is an un-named poem i wrote after watching a few episodes of The Walking Dead

Shut myself in blackness, i'm nothing of this world.
My mind is full of madness, my inner sanctuary unfurled.
I think nothing of the family, whom I happily left behind.
I only wish to rot in the dark, where happiness i find.
This black mist covers my soul, like night takes over day.
My tears and sorrow long gone, forever locked away.
I've been cursed and forsaken, to the devil my soul I give.
I only hunger for one thing, The flesh of those who live.

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The world gone mad, unending sorrow
Humanity of the past say there's no tomorrow.
People party hard, having one last drink
But on the next day, no time to think.
On google, bing, and yahoo too.
Searches will be made, for a hangover cure brew.

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The vast majority of my writings are "raw and unedited" and are actually really sloppy-ish, but i'll eventually go over them and clean them up a bit to resemble something more "professional"
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12-12-2012, 07:40 AM #2
Fer
Banned
You were a poet and you didn't even know it. Who'd thunk. Seriously though those are deep.
12-12-2012, 07:58 AM #3
Richtofen
Ze Doctor
i see what you did there.
12-12-2012, 05:40 PM #4
Keomo
Can’t trickshot me!
Good stuff, but in future poems be a bit more spacious in your use of words and imagery.

You can freely use them to give the poem more strength.
12-12-2012, 06:26 PM #5
Richtofen
Ze Doctor
Originally posted by Keomo View Post
Good stuff, but in future poems be a bit more spacious in your use of words and imagery.

You can freely use them to give the poem more strength.


i try to keep my poems relatively simple, i don't like making them sound way too complex.
12-12-2012, 06:45 PM #6
Keomo
Can’t trickshot me!
Originally posted by xxRICHTOFENxx View Post
i try to keep my poems relatively simple, i don't like making them sound way too complex.


You can also make them more simple that way...
12-12-2012, 08:25 PM #7
Richtofen
Ze Doctor
i guess so.
12-21-2012, 02:06 AM #8
Richtofen
Ze Doctor
Added an apocalypse poem.
12-21-2012, 02:09 AM #9
Toke
PC Master Race
fgt :carling:
12-21-2012, 02:09 AM #10
YouAppreciateMe
I Be That Pretty Mother****er
Originally posted by xxRICHTOFENxx View Post
i'm a bit of a creative writer sometimes, mostly short stories and song lyrics to go along with my musical compositions, but every now and then i'll come up with some dark poetry.
------
The first half of this one i put on my album art for my set of releases known as "The Infected"

Beware the ones who walk in death
Their bodies cold, and without breath
As they attack the ones who dare survive,
Humanity suffers because Death is alive.

Damned are the ones that carry sin
Their flesh is tainted, the rot within
As they wander aimlessly in search of release,
Until the decay brings them peace.

------
This is an un-named poem i wrote after watching a few episodes of The Walking Dead

Shut myself in blackness, i'm nothing of this world.
My mind is full of madness, my inner sanctuary unfurled.
I think nothing of the family, whom I happily left behind.
I only wish to rot in the dark, where happiness i find.
This black mist covers my soul, like night takes over day.
My tears and sorrow long gone, forever locked away.
I've been cursed and forsaken, to the devil my soul I give.
I only hunger for one thing, The flesh of those who live.

------

The world gone mad, unending sorrow
Humanity of the past say there's no tomorrow.
People party hard, having one last drink
But on the next day, no time to think.
On google, bing, and yahoo too.
Searches will be made, for a hangover cure brew.

------


The vast majority of my writings are "raw and unedited" and are actually really sloppy-ish, but i'll eventually go over them and clean them up a bit to resemble something more "professional"


:love: the last one man good job

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