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Post: Freestyle/Free Write Love Poem
11-08-2009, 04:00 AM #1
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Love
The happiness in you
Where someone fills for you
When you feel like a god
When your at the high rise
You think of her as not a prize
But as a beautiful goddess
That swept you of your feet
And Put You In Heaven
This is the happiness that Loves Cannot Defy
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11-08-2009, 04:15 AM #2
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Ive got a better one.

Ready....................

Roses are red
Violets are blue
And i luv you too!!


xD

Thats nominee winning poem of the century!!

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11-08-2009, 04:36 AM #3
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11-08-2009, 08:16 AM #4
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Originally posted by NanuGama View Post
I was just typing my mind I think.

Love
The happiness in you
Where someone fills for you
When you feel like a god
When your at the high rise
You think of her as not a prize
But as a beautiful goddess
That swept you of your feet
And Put You In Heaven
This is the happiness that Loves Cannot Defy

That was pretty terrible, minus rep.
11-08-2009, 05:30 PM #5
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Originally posted by mAn View Post
That was pretty terrible, minus rep.


I did this at 11PM
I was soo tired
Its called a freestyle/free write of course it may suck.
UPDATE: I also was writing this from the heart.
11-08-2009, 05:35 PM #6
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my hicky markz r red
my balz r blue
and i think my seemen smells like you Smile
not innaproprite because fail spelling?

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THE_JoKeR
11-08-2009, 09:54 PM #7
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Originally posted by NanuGama View Post
I did this at 11PM
I was soo tired
Its called a freestyle/free write of course it may suck.
UPDATE: I also was writing this from the heart.


Why are you gunna post it if it sucks.
Why are you saying "from the heart" on the internet, everyone will just call you a fag.
11-08-2009, 10:07 PM #8
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Originally posted by AgentPigJon View Post
Why are you gunna post it if it sucks.
Why are you saying "from the heart" on the internet, everyone will just call you a fag.


Well I Just Wanted To Post My Creativity.
Sheeze!!
11-09-2009, 12:12 AM #9
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Originally posted by NanuGama View Post
Well I Just Wanted To Post My Creativity.
Sheeze!!


Yeah I know, I like you bro, but for real, you have to work on your grammar.
Stop capitalizing every word in the sentence, it's an eye sore. :p.
11-09-2009, 12:14 AM #10
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Originally posted by AgentPigJon View Post
Yeah I know, I like you bro, but for real, you have to work on your grammar.
Stop capitalizing every word in the sentence, it's an eye sore. :p.


Sorry.
it's just I used to do it thinking it was "official", Now it's a habit.

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