Post: In progress prolouge
11-24-2015, 01:24 AM #1
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); There are those among us that desperately search for refuge and help, lost among the sea of people that washes over the world. In all their journey and searching, they neglect to turn to the one that has the theoretical map and is patiently waiting to guide them. Sometimes by mistake, other times out of stubbornness.

Jenny is a 15 year old girl struggling against the fight with herself, always trying to push forward, only to become tangled with her own expectations. Forgetting that she is not the only one in harms way, unintentionally her soul has become harnessed by her unrealistic ideals, like chains weighing her down. She believed there was no harm in dreaming of a better life, but unknowingly, her greed began to consume her. She forgot this golden rule: If you are hurting yourself more than helping, you need to dream another dream.

As the saying goes, you reap what you sow. So many don't know how to tend to the garden of their lives. Jenny was one of these people. She had always neglected necessities like family and friends, allowing her own bad habits to flourish. Time and again, opportunities were presented to her, but in her stubbornness wasted them, much like ignoring the ripening fruit of labor, allowing the rotten fruit to fall to the ground.

Fighting the endless battle, she’s not only dragged herself down, but tangled her brother in the downward spiral. They are trapped in a metaphorical stronghold of the spirit.

Having fallen into temptation, Jenny must be reborn anew through her coming life trials in order to overcome and break free. We only get one chance to shine. Can she defy the odds saving herself and her brother all on her own?
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11-24-2015, 04:03 AM #2
avatar1o1234
Samurai Poster
Originally posted by Starstrikee View Post
There are those among us that desperately search for refuge and help, lost among the sea of people that washes over the world. In all their journey and searching, they neglect to turn to the one that has the theoretical map and is patiently waiting to guide them. Sometimes by mistake, other times out of stubbornness.

Jenny is a 15 year old girl struggling against the fight with herself, always trying to push forward, only to become tangled with her own expectations. Forgetting that she is not the only one in harms way, unintentionally her soul has become harnessed by her unrealistic ideals, like chains weighing her down. She believed there was no harm in dreaming of a better life, but unknowingly, her greed began to consume her. She forgot this golden rule: If you are hurting yourself more than helping, you need to dream another dream.

As the saying goes, you reap what you sow. So many don't know how to tend to the garden of their lives. Jenny was one of these people. She had always neglected necessities like family and friends, allowing her own bad habits to flourish. Time and again, opportunities were presented to her, but in her stubbornness wasted them, much like ignoring the ripening fruit of labor, allowing the rotten fruit to fall to the ground.

Fighting the endless battle, she’s not only dragged herself down, but tangled her brother in the downward spiral. They are trapped in a metaphorical stronghold of the spirit.

Having fallen into temptation, Jenny must be reborn anew through her coming life trials in order to overcome and break free. We only get one chance to shine. Can she defy the odds saving herself and her brother all on her own?


Not bad. Smile
11-24-2015, 08:57 PM #3
Thanks.

I think it's too long tho
11-24-2015, 11:54 PM #4
Toke
PC Master Race
Originally posted by Starstrikee View Post
There are those among us that desperately search for refuge and help, lost among the sea of people that washes over the world. In all their journey and searching, they neglect to turn to the one that has the theoretical map and is patiently waiting to guide them. Sometimes by mistake, other times out of stubbornness.

Jenny is a 15 year old girl struggling against the fight with herself, always trying to push forward, only to become tangled with her own expectations. Forgetting that she is not the only one in harms way, unintentionally her soul has become harnessed by her unrealistic ideals, like chains weighing her down. She believed there was no harm in dreaming of a better life, but unknowingly, her greed began to consume her. She forgot this golden rule: If you are hurting yourself more than helping, you need to dream another dream.

As the saying goes, you reap what you sow. So many don't know how to tend to the garden of their lives. Jenny was one of these people. She had always neglected necessities like family and friends, allowing her own bad habits to flourish. Time and again, opportunities were presented to her, but in her stubbornness wasted them, much like ignoring the ripening fruit of labor, allowing the rotten fruit to fall to the ground.

Fighting the endless battle, she’s not only dragged herself down, but tangled her brother in the downward spiral. They are trapped in a metaphorical stronghold of the spirit.

Having fallen into temptation, Jenny must be reborn anew through her coming life trials in order to overcome and break free. We only get one chance to shine. Can she defy the odds saving herself and her brother all on her own?


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11-26-2015, 07:05 PM #5
Pffffttt

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