ok 1. bad text, 2. what is tht thing to his left? a fist o.O looks bad, 3. the light streaks take tht off it throws off from ur focal, 4. too dark
ways to improve: id say add a better light source not light streak, brighten the sug and put better text with a border.
toal i give you a 6/10
(btw thats my new way of rating)