i think since hes looking back he should have somthing to look at myyb like a enemy or something.
Needs some more effects Like mayyb a C4d.
BGs a Bit plain.
and render needs ta be blended more.
BUT This is Better than your 1st on KIU.
Just Think i Used to be worse than u now i can make the things in my sig. (Dont Take that as a Insult)