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Just let me know if I'm on the right track.

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Did a couple new ones, please help with feedback, I took in some of your guys suggestions, and I'm not right there, I just feel like its messy more than what It could amount to be. All advice helps, thanks.

Justin

I like the first one...pretty simple but i actually like it. the second one is a bit messy...maybe use a smaller render?? idk i'm not an expert at this either.

They both have more than one render on them.

Only use 1 Render, Use c4d's that FLOW, stick possibly to 1 color, different shades of it, get better render qualities, You NEED new text, and you need a 2 px black border


Hope this helps

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oh, and in most cases, erase the c4ds that are on the render, unless it doesnt flow.

I ment c4ds, The only render is the car. I took notes to your comments, thanks for the feedback, will try this out later today.

i agree with Pray i think you should erase the C4D off the render, and get some new text go visit resource you'll get some websites or PM me because if i post the link i think it's advertivsing... am not sure.

Your focal (render) should stand out in your sig.
When using c4ds you cannot just throw them on, you have to blend them (smudging, bluring, etc.).
Please stay away from the outer glow or stroke on your focal cause it makes it look like crap and takes away from your sig.
Go to You must login or register to view this content. for some new fonts.
Here's a tut I made like last year but it's a car sig tut.
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Make the render smaller, try using only 1 or 2 C4D's and combine them with the render to create depth and composition rather than just spamming them on weird blending modes. Use light effect C4D's as effects but don't over do it, and avoid using text unless it completely fits with the rest of the tag.