I don't really like this one Caspa,
I just think the render used is over complicated. What i mean is I stuggle to find the focal with there being 3 main faces. If you understand that.
i agree with Daisho, and a little piece of advice; Try not to use the same C4D's over and over and over, it gets annoying and redundant. Another bit of advice, you should try to use the light flares from the C4D's to highlight the focal and not just be random points of attention, if that makes sense?
Like i said on your last sig, id like to see a different style from you. It was really good the first 15 odd times, but now, its still good. But i sort of expect it, which is disappointing =/.