Hmm imo, not bad, you should clean up the focal and erase the brusing from over her, then flip her around, becusase i think she is going against the flwo of the tag, then do a copy visable, and raise the contrast a bit in the bg its a lil dull, id say erase the contrasted layer over her, and just keep it on the bg, then mabey try something to give a more defined focal.