(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Ok so I made these two. I know what people have been saying " it needs to blend more and have more depth..." well I looked up some tut's and tell me what u think...

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Rate / hate / appreciate / like what ever really.

Tell me what i need to improve on and what i need to change. Thanks guys ~ DRaKE-xx

These are really good bro.Can you tell me where did you find the tutorials in a private message?

I sent u a tut in a PM and i hope it help u....not like u need help urs is sexy!

The first one is good. I noticed you used the same text and style in both. Try changing it a bit more, text is pretty easy and definitely fun to work with. In the 2nd one the text doesn't go well in my opinion. The 2nd one looks good, the liquify/ripple is a bit too simple. I think you could bring both of these a bit further, but otherwise the 1st one is good and 2nd one has a good stock and colored background, just play around with them a bit and try and improve your text.

OK thanks bro =) i do diff texts and people tell me to change it....so im running into a brick wall with the texts lol

the backgrounds seem like its just rippled ,text in bottom one does not work, erase the outline of the render a bit to get some blending like its part of background. Use some c4d's.

I guess you dont see i did use C4D's and also Yes the are rippled / waved thats this style for that kind =) im making a gradient one for my next release for me any ways =)

Change the text, I never really use stroke round texts if i do don't have it that big. Your getting better but maybe try different effects that ripple, keep checking out new tut's and KIU.