Ehh I'm not loving it. The text is well done but there is some other stuff that I'll point out. The border on the left side should be reduced to the 1 or 2 pixel one you already have. Make something stand out. It all looks flat, make the render stand out more would be my advice. For the tile effect here's what you should do. Higher the opacity a bit and erase some of them especially on the face. Then it will look pretty good. Kinda simple but alright. 7/10 sorry but right now lordafi has got my vote between you two right now. I'll see how your's looks once you fix it up.