Can't read the text but I like this blending style you're doing now. I pretty much like all you're styles though. Other than that I'd just say that the render/stock you used isn't all that great but you made it work. 8.5/10
Nice atleast you've tried a diffrent text style, you should make a tut on this kind of style i'd love to learn it!
i just dont like the render xD. 8.5-9/10