(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); hey guys, i just made this, tell me what you think.... i aint the best at grafix so any feedback will be greatly appreciated, thanks


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Good lighting but it's actually too bright and the left side is totally empty.

Really? What are those word things over there?.

OP: Your problem is your lighting, you focused it too much. Because of this, it seems, that you've made the entire far right and left pitch black and light-less. Also, your text is overwhelming and kills the focal.

Add something in the left, It doesn't seem to light to me and urghh try blend/lower opacity of text.

I meant by effects. I new someone was going to bug me bout that :/

:evil:, I'm the man for the job.

Yes you are.

What shall i do next my mentor??

ok, thanks for the advise, i'll listen to it and get working on it again, i'll post the updateed version here