the way you made teh C4D follow the flow of the render is very good. but if you want to make a render glow like you tried. you should Gaussain blue one render layer then paste in a new one on top then erase the edges. and once again you did the C4D background :\
5/10. gettin' better.
PS. you used a less complicated font. good start. keep workin.
yea... i tried using your advice that you gave me...
and thanks for the tip about the glows...
you guys are lots of help