Teext is bad, WAAYY too overcontrasted, Oversharpened around the focal.
I'd say get rid of the text on the left and take the black stroke off your clipping mask text..Black stroke text rarely looks nice imo, The border is creative but I don't like it, I'd say scrap the border for this sig.For the clipping mask text make it smaller and pick a different place for the background of it, also move it a bit closer to the focal. Overall this is a very messy sig and I'd give it a Begginers 4/5.....Its a high begginers because you used a lot of techniques but they didn't look good.GJ all the less and KIU