Borders are bad, Text is meh but atleast it doesn't stick out....That compostition is off well could just the focal, I am more attracted to his chest instead of the face because it seems to be what is supposed to be the focal...Effects aren't bad, One of your best defiantly, Keep it up.
i'm thinking the chest sticks out more because it's closer forground wise than the head is, but at least the render is the focal instead of the text or somthing fail