not bad for a first...but i do have one recommendation, Keep your text simple. adding effects to the text can make it turn into more of a focal, which is bad (unless your text is supposed to be the focal, of course

). You should always want to keep your focal where it was intended.
Btw, I noticed you posted this twice because your original upload was messed up. Don't do that, as it is considered spamming. There is an edit button underneath all of your posts where you can change the contents of the thread. I can assume you did not know this since you only have 24 posts and joined not to long ago. As for the other post...I recommend contacting a mod to have it closed.