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I'm having a bit of artists block and a guy I know said collab with him to help me get out of it..Well here it is, CnC!

Ew, I guess you're right.

1. I can't even see what you're trying to get at.
2. No focal
3. Weird render(s)
4. Weird size

Hope you get out of this slump.:jim:

You just have to have inspiration. I cant make a signature with out inspiration.

The thing is this was a collab so, I didn't choose the render, I didn't chooses the size and I thought the massivly bright lights would direct your attention to the face so um yeah...

Bright lights was a bad choice, it does get me to the focal, but still looks weird, but other than that it looks pretty weird.

Its not all bad like the ladies above state.
The colours are better than the original and the depth is certainly present.

However the lighting and weird pink C4D thing in the middle look a bit odd.
Regarding the size. Its not supposed to be a signature I presume? So you can't say much on that.

at least somone is in thier senses.

but i have to agree with the lighting situation a little bit, tone down the lights so it doesn't cover his face up, thats a focal murder

What kind of boys do you know that's a girl..
And thank you Daisho, but people have opinions so let them say its bad, all I'm looking for are tips.

Depth and colours are great, but the two bright lights are meh :/

Keep it up :y: