Post: Random sig
10-17-2010, 08:45 PM #1
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Yea, probably not as good as my latest ones, but I tried something new to make some flow into it. Smile

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vladieboi
10-18-2010, 05:01 AM #2
videobot34
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Not your best work
the render doesn't "blend in"
colours don't mix
I think the light source is wrong??

the flow looks good except for the zig zag in the back ground

(and probably should put a water mark on the first one)
10-18-2010, 06:50 AM #3
vladieboi
oh hai mark
Not that good, light positioning is bad and the render looks really stretched, his gun looks like an oversized pistol.

Render is poorly made, and so is the background.
Also, you know you can use other fonts but arial, don't you? "/

Cause it seems like you're using the same font all over, and I know fonts that would of matched better here.

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Inferno_Ace
10-19-2010, 12:20 AM #4
Originally posted by videobot34 View Post
Not your best work
the render doesn't "blend in"
colours don't mix
I think the light source is wrong??

the flow looks good except for the zig zag in the back ground

(and probably should put a water mark on the first one)

Yea, I kinda failed at that. :p
Originally posted by vladieboi View Post
Not that good, light positioning is bad and the render looks really stretched, his gun looks like an oversized pistol.

Render is poorly made, and so is the background.
Also, you know you can use other fonts but arial, don't you? "/

Cause it seems like you're using the same font all over, and I know fonts that would of matched better here.


Yea, but i'm not good with fonts. :/
10-19-2010, 12:21 AM #5
Genocide-
★GoML★
The guy looks smooshed. IMO
10-19-2010, 12:22 AM #6
Originally posted by Jon4Bold
The guy looks smooshed. IMO


Yea, I think I wasn't holding shift.
10-19-2010, 12:49 AM #7
The Low Key OG
still the same OG, but I've been low key
1. Render = stretched and I hate that render as it looks cheap.
2. Good try with the flow, it had some potential.:y:
3. Text the same color as the BG is a no no.
4. Terrible render positioning, mostly cut-off.
5. Tags like this need a bit of a border, it's too whilly-nhilly.
6. And no depth, I see a render on a BG. Period. Add stuff on the render, behind the render, around the render, etc etc. By stuff I mean liquification, smudging, brush works, c4d's, fractals and other various resources.

Not your best, but a good attempt.:jim:

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Inferno_Ace
10-20-2010, 04:41 AM #8
ASH_209
Gym leader
I dont really like it to tell you the truth, but its art work. so art will be art looking at picasso.
10-20-2010, 11:19 PM #9
Originally posted by 209 View Post
I dont really like it to tell you the truth, but its art work. so art will be art looking at picasso.


It's fine, Criticism is what I need. Smile
10-21-2010, 12:07 PM #10
ASH_209
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Originally posted by Ace View Post
It's fine, Criticism is what I need. Smile


Yea ok, well mostly wat i need to say the others hav sed, but maybe if yu just fixd the squishd look that it has it could turn out to be a be a keepr. well IMO of course Winky Winky

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