Probably your best so far, but you still need a lot more work.
1. Lack of depth/ general effects
2. I see you always use the generic black border. You don't always have to have one.
3. Dual render seems odd.
4. No depth, render and BG only.
5. Text would be better lower, as it takes away from the focal.
6. Bad lighting, too much darkness in some areas, too much light in others.
You're getting there.:jim:
Thank you for real CnC

@1. Since i didn't have much of a real background, it was hard to be able to add any depth to it.
@2. I kinda like the black border on this...I didn't used to use a border at all, and people kept complaining about that, so I guess maybe they messed me up into thinking I needed a border on everything

@3. Second render on the right was kinda just there to add some fill, but maybe that was a bad idea? I lowered the opacity a lot to try to keep it almost like a watermark.
@4. Only a render... the background is the render repeated several times and then smudged together.
@5. Might try lowering the text...but I had it there because i thought it flowed better there.
@6. I tried to make the lighting look better, but the render just wouldn't cooperate with most of the lighting effects I tried to apply.
As always I will offer up to send you the .psd if you would like to mess around with some of the stuff and show me what you would have done (That goes for everyone else as well

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Originally posted by Vertigo
tbh the text really isnt that good. the overall sig is ok. i like the effects and such. but the blank space to the right is bugging me for some reason.
I tried to fill in the blank on the right with that "watermarkish" render :rolleyes: maybe I failed

. Same offer goes to you that I gave to Og...if you want the .psd to mess with, I can send it to you and you can show me what you think I should improve on