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My first sig, so don't kill me if its terrible.

Tell me what to do beside the basics.

BTW, this was done without any tutorials, not sure how that affected the outcome.

~ABJ

C4D needs behind the render,Render is to dark,To dark. All in all...it's ok.

Border is terrible. Fractal should be removed from in front of the render. I'm not really going to go into much more than that since you are a beginner and you need practice before you will become good. Look into some tutorials because they will help you out a lot! Remember, practice makes perfect, or in the words of pV_irish, "Perfect practice makes perfect" :p

Agreed The border stands out wayyy to much. It is very thick

on the beginnger scale i would say its a 3/10 its to dark it needs c4ds some depth and dont make a boarder like that and make the render stand out like its there for a reason and some tuts would affect the out come like to make all my sigs from tuts they help alot keep trying tho

1. Too dark.
2. C4D placed incorrectly, try behind it.
3. Border no good.
4. Render doesn't stand out.

But pretty good for a first. :y: Just keep at those tutorials.

Will follow all of your suggestions, which seem to be just look at some tuts
Thanks all

decent for a begginer, still need moar practice