1. Never add a stroke to a render. (OG told me on my 3rd sig)
2. C4D doesn't match the render.
3. Color scheme is awful, try to keep most of it the same color.
4. Car stands out to much, try smudging, or using the lasso and then vector.
5. Too much space open.
6. Text isn't good, and stands out to much.
2/10.