Post: Simplicity Is The Way Forward
10-23-2010, 09:47 PM #1
xPwn
Error… Cat invasion!
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All I Did Was:
Added A Render
Added A C4D
Text
And Stroke

Rating Out Of 10?
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10-23-2010, 10:36 PM #2
Pure Decimation
I don't do requests
Never add stroke to a render! (there are only a few special cases where that would be ok)
I say it is too simple.
Background is boring.
C4D doesn't go with the render.
Color scheme is all over the place.
Text looks slapped on.
And once again I must say, do not add stroke to a render!
10-23-2010, 10:47 PM #3
xPwn
Error… Cat invasion!
Originally posted by Pure
Never add stroke to a render! (there are only a few special cases where that would be ok)
I say it is too simple.
Background is boring.
C4D doesn't go with the render.
Color scheme is all over the place.
Text looks slapped on.
And once again I must say, do not add stroke to a render!


1) Im only beginner at GFX
2)This was a 1 minute job
10-23-2010, 10:55 PM #4
Pure Decimation
I don't do requests
Originally posted by iG
1) Im only beginner at GFX
2)This was a 1 minute job


Take more time on your stuff and look at some tutorials. Slapping on a c4d, render, and some text on a gray background with basically nothing else done will not really help you to improve. Spend time on your projects, explore the program, and have fun with it.

And my CnC is always very frank. So do not take it personally. I am hard on you to make you better. Smile
10-23-2010, 11:02 PM #5
xPwn
Error… Cat invasion!
Originally posted by Pure
Take more time on your stuff and look at some tutorials. Slapping on a c4d, render, and some text on a gray background with basically nothing else done will not really help you to improve. Spend time on your projects, explore the program, and have fun with it.

And my CnC is always very frank. So do not take it personally. I am hard on you to make you better. Smile


I understand
Thanks for the constructive criticism
10-23-2010, 11:47 PM #6
1. Never add a stroke to a render. (OG told me on my 3rd sig)
2. C4D doesn't match the render.
3. Color scheme is awful, try to keep most of it the same color.
4. Car stands out to much, try smudging, or using the lasso and then vector.
5. Too much space open.
6. Text isn't good, and stands out to much.

2/10. :(

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