Originally posted by Zendikar
I seriously hate how people think other people's work is so good, when it's not all that.
But I have to get used to it.
Anyways.
RULE OF THIRDS
That focal is DIRECTLY in the middle. Seriously.
DON'T USE A BORDER IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO USE IT PROPERLY
Like, look at it. Tiny and useless.
LIGHTING IS ASS
There's some white crap on him. Looks stupid. The effects on him are too bright and don't blend whatsoever.
THE EFFECTS SUCK
The thing on the right. What the hell. Did someone send cum a'flying?'
WHERE THE HELL IS THE FLOW
What flow?
Read some tuts.
Don't go CAPS on people. That seems as if your trying to be very mean, rather than just trying to get a point across :y:. I know what your saying and can agree with some of the points, whilst others I see as mostly just your opinion and can't really take them seriously (ex. "That focal is DIRECTLY in the middle. Seriously." I mean seriously, what difference does it make where my focal is. As long as it is clearly defined, the postioning should not matter.). O and I fixed the "cum flying" in the final edit. I realized it looked bad after I finished (You can see that in my actual sig :y

. Also, try actually telling people what you think they should have done rather than just saying "THE EFFECTS SUCK." What could I have improved on in the effects? And finally, the border is "Tiny and useless" because it looked bad without a border and looked bad any bigger. Believe me, I know how to put a border on a sig.
Please in the future, try not to act like an ass in CnC's or you will receive many groaned posts and a lot of -rep.