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Just looks like you slapped some random brushes and text on it. I am not going to go any further in depth in CnC on this since you are a beginner. Look into some tutorials and practice, practice, practice.

NO! Tell me everything thats wrong. I need to get better..

I can't get better if your holding back.. :mad: .

Don't treat me as a beginner . Treat me like everyone else.

I only put text so noone could rip it :p

You are a BEGINNER. CnCing this would be pointless. Until you know the program, half the stuff I say will just be pointless. Look at tutorials and learn the program. That is advice, which, in my opinion, is far better than any CnC.

do it again but like on the second one make it look like wind blowing across black

Motion blur looks bad, nothing caught my eye and it's very boring. Add some more effects.

Random steel pad on the right side.
I hate Wiz Khalifa (Pick Eminem Damnit!)
Renders a tad dark (not bein racist ) with a light shirt kinda looks tacky IMO.
Get the Smudgey effect off of the render or atleast make it a smaller portion.

Other than that i like it

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