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Bad effect, using black & white and the color. If you knew how to use it correctly.
Bad lighting
Bad blending of the C4D's
Bad render choice
Bad blending OF the render

How about expanding on that?
You post a thread on how to give CnC and then you post something like this?
Maybe you should practice what you preach.

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I can't buddy. I'm too busy atm. Sorry.

Expanding? what expanding? What I said is blantly obvious of what I'm talking about.

And about my thread of CnC? I based it off of that. Yes. Think about it.

Its not very helpful to anybody if you just point out what you think is wrong. Expanding means saying whats wrong and how in your opinion the OP should improve the tag.

Well then.

For one, I would think of bringing some C4D's in that are similar to the C4D's you already have, or just move the ones you have closer to the focal. Something along the lines of making the C4D a part of the focal. As if it was supposed to be there. For another, the lighting looks like it was just pasted into it. Why not dodge the C4D's where the lighting would hit? It makes a good effect, and makes the lighting look a bit real. Though I'd say to not use that lighting. The black and white on the left?
Just get rid of it.
Also, the focal looks very pixely. Try using a different one.