Post: Not sure what to title this.... Smudge again?
11-27-2010, 07:14 PM #1
+sFx. FeLiciTy
Lord and Saviour
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Idk what to think of this. the left side looks funny again but i like the right side. some CnC would be appreciated.
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11-27-2010, 08:43 PM #2
1. I like the smudging, but think in some places the red wasn't necessary. (IMO)
2. Good job on blending the render in.
3. Text isn't good, too dark. I suggest using lighter colors, but all depends what your working on.

Good job overall.

No expert on smudging though. :p
11-27-2010, 08:46 PM #3
+sFx. FeLiciTy
Lord and Saviour
Originally posted by Ace View Post
1. I like the smudging, but think in some places the red wasn't necessary. (IMO)
2. Good job on blending the render in.
3. Text isn't good, too dark. I suggest using lighter colors, but all depends what your working on.

Good job overall.

No expert on smudging though. :p

Haha man i jused used the render, and selective coulor for the red Smile I used a clipping mask for the text so its kinda difficult to get it lighter without it blending in too much. I do agree that im terrible at text tho.
11-27-2010, 08:47 PM #4
Originally posted by sfx.
Haha man i jused used the render, and selective coulor for the red Smile I used a clipping mask for the text so its kinda difficult to get it lighter without it blending in too much. I do agree that im terrible at text tho.


Yeah, and i'm bad at text, but we all improve. Smile
11-27-2010, 10:17 PM #5
+Sfx Krush
Childish Gambino <3
You did a good job on the smudging part but i disagree with inferno about the blending, it looks weird on the shoulder part (or whatever that blue thing is), i think you could have done a better job with that...it looks kinda grainy on the right side idk why, and you could have probably added some depth to it a little, the text should probably be in a different place so it doesn't look too camouflaged....im not a big fan of anime but it looks ok
11-28-2010, 12:14 AM #6
+sFx. FeLiciTy
Lord and Saviour
Originally posted by Dr.
You did a good job on the smudging part but i disagree with inferno about the blending, it looks weird on the shoulder part (or whatever that blue thing is), i think you could have done a better job with that...it looks kinda grainy on the right side idk why, and you could have probably added some depth to it a little, the text should probably be in a different place so it doesn't look too camouflaged....im not a big fan of anime but it looks ok

Ok i will try that... also its a cape, and i know... im trying to get this style right... its in a tutorial for a style pretty much. Anyways, thanks for the feedback.

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