Originally posted by Favo
Firstly, the colours are bad. You need to make the focal clearer, add some depth and a few effects!
Keep it up! :y:
What Favo said
You need to make the render stand out more, right now it seems like it blends with the other colors and is almost hidden. It also looks a little blurry, but it may just be some effects you used. Otherwise it's pretty good