the focal is definately set but the only thing telling me that is the random lines. thats not good. the text wants to kill me because it's a much to complicated font. and the color has nothing to do with the rest of the sig. work on blending and effects.
Never use those lines again and do like i did with my sig and get some effect C4D's and add them on Screen with 100 opacy and it should give you a look a lot like my sig.
well most C4D's will have a vanishing point somwhere on them. you should rotate them untill you get the effects were you like them and then put the vanishing point of the C4D
over the focal so that the focal has base effects and isn't distorted by any part of the C4D.
Turned out good I think
