Post: Infinity. <3
04-07-2009, 02:42 AM #1
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); So, I decided to do something different. I spent an amazingly long time on this, so please give good C&C. I want to improve it, but also hear how well I did.
I tried creating depth in all of the part of this artwork. You'll see it in each section.
And also, I realized that the star I put in, the big dark yellow one, that it's not well placed, but was too late, since I had duplicated layers already covering it.

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04-07-2009, 02:44 AM #2
Grimsley33
On Top of the Game
thats pretty cool, its like the kind of thing were working on in web design in school.
04-07-2009, 10:08 AM #3
+PsyFX
You talkin to me?
sorry lord am not really into that... you can see the quality but its a bit random all over...
i like it as a showcase off what you can do but as an image not that fond of it.

Use all talents in that image in another one or sig and try keep a common theme, i get the infinity in space, maybe if it was set... city next to sky, next to space it give the idea of flowing into infinity, and beyond (no buzz lightyear joke intended). but butterflys? where did that idea come from, the present bow looks cool, but if u look at the white behind it it kinda looks placed on top and i reckon i could been blended better, and finally i'll pick up on the headphones in the middle looking like there floating infront of the gurls head :S confused with that one.

on the whole u can see alot of talent in it. i'm only picking up on the bad bits cause its better to tell you tan praise the good bits ^^

i'll say an honest 5/10 to mixed and matched for me, kinda like a patchwork quilt
04-07-2009, 11:36 AM #4
Yea I know, the whole thing was random lol Smile
04-07-2009, 11:50 AM #5
Human
League Champion
It is very random, but I'm not feeling it, good imagination! 6/10
04-07-2009, 07:40 PM #6
Way too random, colors don't flow and match, get rid of the butterflies, get rid of the clouds section (put something else dark in there), then maybe it will start looking a bit better. Take the red border on the left off as well. Also the head is over-sharpened or has too much over it I can't tell which. Last maybe add some pentool somewhere, maybe around the bow.
04-07-2009, 10:59 PM #7
Btw that's not a cloud, it's a nebulae or something. I'd do what you advised, but I can't, since I have a ton of duplicated images on top. I'll post more artworks, just waitz Happy
04-07-2009, 11:09 PM #8
+PsyFX
You talkin to me?
your trying to tell us that the top left isn't an image of clouds????? who u trying to kid lmao

- cool can't wait to see ur next, those skills in a diff image shoulde be cool ^^
04-07-2009, 11:18 PM #9
The nebula may be in the space part but those are definitely clouds lol. And yeah I know you can't change it I just am giving comments like you aksed (black people language for asked).

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