(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Well this is my entry for SOTW, i pretty much did this for Gobucks . Like always C&C, don't forget to use iTerminate's new rating system.

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i saw this madden and i'm actually impressed, it looks not bad, c4d coulda been blended better but the idea, even the background seems to work... don't get me wrong there is still a long road ahead to be a pro but from what i hav seen before from u, u are defo learnin :p

- composotion is great
- text is bit large and basic
- background is ok, but it looks a bit weird but somehow works with the hair braides >_<
- shoulda maybe left one side of sparrow full opac and blended it into the non solid side, if u get me

all in all keep it up, am still gona go with - beginner 5 - because its not got the skills bud, but that don't mean to eye its not a better piece of your work that just means the skills used are rather standard of the bar :p

Actually that background took awhile, I used a few layers on it. I just spent most of the time on background, it was hard for to find the proper render settings for the c4d. If you want i can upload the PS file and you could improve it for me and send it back.

Well, the signature looks okay, the contrast it way off.
Also, that background consists only of like a couple of c4d's and brushes. Usually it takes more than just a few layers.
Then, because there's not depth, and the "effects" are too spread out, there's no focal point. The text takes away the attention from the focal. Beginner 6.

I actually didn't use any brushes, and there is only one C4D. I want the text to be visible, i always see sigs with text that no1 can read and i don't want people saying the same about mine.

Maybe if you mask the selection of the sig then put a color overlay over the background or something. As those colors don't fit

Beginner 5/5