compared to your others its good, your making progress but other than that its still very beginner
no focal, render is to dark cant see what it is in the middle, too small and the overall sig itself is way too dark also. When doing a border try using just a black bar on top and bottom to add a cinematic effect and make your render take up around 50% of your sig. Not much going on tbh
keep trying though, for some tutorials head on over too sigtuts.com
beginner 3/5