Originally posted by Depression
Well, overall it's just way too much of not enough.
It's great that you're nor just using premade backgrounds and renders, actually using filters and such to make a background, but in this case it's literally _just_ a filter for a background, a render plopped on top, and text. You really want to be incorporating more.
Check out some tutorials on DeviantArt, it'll help you out a lot in learning new things.