1. the render and the background don't flow what so ever.
2.the random pink and red things in the front annoy me, not so great...
3.the text should be left alone, until you understand how to make the signature flow.
4.tutorials are always the best way of learning.
Soon enough you'll pick up on what looks good , and what looks bad.
You'll discover your style, as this may take a long time.
Good luck, will be glad to see you in this section more :y:
not to bad for a first, as I've seen much worst for a 1st. :p