There's good and bad in this piece. I like the texture, and the text fits together (for the most part) well. But it's too compressed at the top, with way too much empty space before the planet, that it just looks awkward. The way some of the letters overlap with others is bad in some places (the MA in "may", the TH in "the", the CE in "force", and the IT in "with") because they mess up the letters and can be confusing if you don't already know what it's supposed to say.
Other than that, the flares on the text are a bit cheesy and don't fit with the texture, the parts that fade to black do it too quickly (it should be more gradual, and you shouldn't fade the text to black entirely, in my opinion), and the stars need to be across the entirety of space.