Im not very sure about the editing vids - i like them but i dont :S
The intro one i dont like:
I dont like the text size's.
I dont like the way the orange text is way beneath the grey text.
I dont like the way the orange text is visable from the very start.
However i like the idea... i had a go of this transition text:
There just my thoughts & im not the best with C4D... maybe someone with better knowledge can see more good then bad.