Ok, the text is your main problem. Also, you need to blur/sharpen to add depth to the piece. I say remove all the text. There's too much, it has poor placement and the fonts don't match.
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Originally posted by Iriish
That looks pretty amazing. A little more depth in the smoke and it would be a perfect 10.
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