Not too bright, but weird lighting. Try to keep it centralized and not too overwhelming on the outer parts. Also, you never seem to focus on flow.
yeah thanks!
Mainly the lighting came from the C4DS in screen. I guess next time I'll use Overlay for a less bright effect. I didn't centralize it because I wanted the text to fit in !, as noone so far has said anything about the text. I'm guessing it fits !!