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didnt know you GFX...
here i dont really see the focal or anything.... the brushing on the right could be touched up alittle so you can try to not make it so dotty...
Text overwhelms the sig and should get towned down alittle and shouldnt say so much... it just doesnt really flow but nice idea... beginner 4/5