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its a bit messy i know

I can't see it.

Fixed it

Alright, well, it's definitely messy. You got that right.
Marcus should be your focal, however, you've blurred him and make him harder to notice. It's got a really weird flow to it that I'm not a fan of as well. Sorry, not your best.

It's pretty good...

However, like Low Key said Marcus should be the focal point but instead my eyes are distracted by the blue that goes into his hand.

Also on the left side it seems like the "flow" starts to go back up in an upward left diagonal. In my opinion, you should have just kept it going diagonally downward towards the left so that it really matches Marcus.