I hate when people cnc like the above comments.
here we go.
I'm not sure what affect you were going for here, but its not working so much in your favor.
Lighting is off, although your friend helped you out a lot!!!
the c4d in the top left corner, I don't know what its doing there, as it doesn't flow at all.
the swirl by his arm on the right doesn't fit in , looks like it was slapped there. :/
and the sword , it attracts my eyes a little to much, drawing away from the focal.
blurring is needed as well